I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Tuesday, 17 February 2015
Goal Setting Conference
Here is My Goal Setting Conference that I'm going to use in the goal setting
Conference. Hope you enjoy my Goal Setting Conference and make sure to come
back to check what I'm posting.
Wednesday, 11 February 2015
Welcome to 2015 Its FINALLY HERE!!!
2015 is here and now we can get back to our learning at school. It is now week 2 and we are having a great time. We also have goals set for the next few weeks.
Tuesday, 9 December 2014
My End Of Year Reflection!
Here is my end of year reflection because it is near the end of 2014 now we
are heading into 2015! Hope you enjoy and have a great CHRISTMAS!
Wednesday, 12 November 2014
Narrative Writing
Begin writing here:
I was meeting Garry under the bridge we we're going to have a fun time but then I did something wrong.
“Garry hurry up I'm already under the bridge and I'm freezing my fingers off!” Shouted Geoff.
“Stop being impatient just wait okay,” said Garry. Garry finally got here we we're getting the fireworks ready.
“Ready here it goes!” shouted Geoff. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! After I saw that fire work I just went crazy and couldn't control my shelf it was like I had boundless energy for fireworks.
“Fire works fire works oh I love fire works,” said Geoff.
“Geoff stop before you hurt someone!” Shouted Garry.
“Huh Garry watch out the bridge!” Shouted Geoff.
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Screamed Garry.
It was Sadistic moment for me to watch my brother get burned and squash by a bridge. Hes still alive but I don’t know how much longer he can survive.
“Doc, can I see him now?” said Geoff.
“Sure, but he won’t speak very long,” said the doctor.
“Hey man, how you doing?” said Geoff
“Well not very well,” said Garry.
“Listen I'm on my last dying breath I just want to say goodbye to you and the family and mum and dad you have a great life and never ever touch fireworks… Okay,” said Garry.
“Good bye and have a great life,” said Garry.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
“Good bye brother,” cried Geoff.
Cry cry cry cry.
Living with myself on the death of my brother was really sad and bad and I swear to never touch fireworks again.
THE END
This is my writing inspired by this prompt.
I hope you enjoy reading.
Geoff loves Guy Fawkes and looks
forward to it every year. But,
last night something went wrong.
I was meeting Garry under the bridge we we're going to have a fun time but then I did something wrong.
“Garry hurry up I'm already under the bridge and I'm freezing my fingers off!” Shouted Geoff.
“Stop being impatient just wait okay,” said Garry. Garry finally got here we we're getting the fireworks ready.
“Ready here it goes!” shouted Geoff. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! After I saw that fire work I just went crazy and couldn't control my shelf it was like I had boundless energy for fireworks.
“Fire works fire works oh I love fire works,” said Geoff.
“Geoff stop before you hurt someone!” Shouted Garry.
“Huh Garry watch out the bridge!” Shouted Geoff.
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Screamed Garry.
It was Sadistic moment for me to watch my brother get burned and squash by a bridge. Hes still alive but I don’t know how much longer he can survive.
“Doc, can I see him now?” said Geoff.
“Sure, but he won’t speak very long,” said the doctor.
“Hey man, how you doing?” said Geoff
“Well not very well,” said Garry.
“Listen I'm on my last dying breath I just want to say goodbye to you and the family and mum and dad you have a great life and never ever touch fireworks… Okay,” said Garry.
“Good bye and have a great life,” said Garry.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
“Good bye brother,” cried Geoff.
Cry cry cry cry.
Living with myself on the death of my brother was really sad and bad and I swear to never touch fireworks again.
THE END
This is my writing inspired by this prompt.
I hope you enjoy reading.
Geoff loves Guy Fawkes and looks
forward to it every year. But,
last night something went wrong.
Monday, 27 October 2014
This it my presentation about Armageddon Its a fun event to go to there's gaming,
cosplay, anime, zombie events and all sorts of cool stuff.
I recommended you should go its a fun thing for the family.
Friday, 24 October 2014
Writing The Ultimate Gaming battle of history.
Begging
Ding ding ding! Yah! “Glass dismiss have a great weekend not,” He said quietly.
“Delirious!”
“What!”
“Want to meet up at my place!”
“Sure what time!”
“Seven thirty!”
“Okay!”
“Can I bring Vanoss Nogla and Lui!”
“Sure!”
Build up
Tump Tump Tump! “Hello Buac Lau you their!”
“Oh hi guys come in so what do you guys want to do,” asked Buac Lau.
“Well I just came here to play video games,” said Vanoss.
“Well come on lets go,” kindly said Buac.
“ Sir I have located them,” said teleporting fat guy.
“You have thats great go and get them now teleporting fat guy,” Said Dragonborn.
“Yes Sir!”
Problem
“Guys watch out theres a guy on the left trying to flank us!” shouted Lui
“Don’t worry I got him hes down,” Said delirious.
Poof! “whoa what the game crashed,” said Buca Lau
“What!” shouted Nogla
“It didn't,” said teleporting fat guy.
“you're all coming with me,” said teleporting fat guy.
“Wait no!” Shouted all of them
“ahhhhhhhhh!” they shouted in fear.
“Whoa we're are we?”
“I don’t know but at least we're in one peace,” said delirious said
“Never mind I said to early!”
“You're all coming with me!”
Problem pt 2
“Hello is anyone in here?”
“What who said that!”
“Me your brain” said brain.
“What my brain!” shouted Delirious.
“Yes am a really important piece you have to keep me safe,” said brain.
“Okay whatever you say just don’t hurt me,” said delirious.
“Fus sha da!”
“My name is dragonborn and I have brought you here today to fight the side of good,” said dragonborn.
“So what do you say will you join us or the side of evil,” said dragonborn.
“Will join on one condition we can come back here when ever we want and we can have so much chocolate,” said delirious.
“Sure Ghost get that done,” said dragonborn.
“On it sir,”
Resolution
“Everyone to your battle stations!”
“Ready steady attack!”
As me and my friends run I feel the wind flowing through my hair I can smell the blood of my enemies disintegrating. But then I feel the thumping of big foots stomping. I see this big dog who has all the gaming powers you can imagine. I grab my sword and my gun and I can’t control my shelf I jump as high I can and I swing!
As the that devil dog disintegrates everybody is quiet for second then.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
“Delirious you beat him I can’t believe you beat dogzilla!”
Ending
“Congratulations delirious you defeated dogzilla and now we're free yaaaaa!”
“Teleporting fat guy take them home!”
“Yes sir!”
“Its been a pleasure to meet you goodbye also come back whenever you want,” kindly said dragonborn.
“Goodbye everyone,”
The End.
This is my writing it was inspired by a man being chase by a dog. It was a picture that my teacher found on the internet.
Saturday, 18 October 2014
Narrative Writing Never Forget School
Never Forget School
Zzzz Zzzz Zzzz! “Simeon wake up!”
“What is it why did you wake me up from my slumber,” I said.
“Because,”bam!
“That's better I can crawl back into my little bed and have a little nap,” I said. here I go dozing off again.
10 Minutes later poof! “Huh!” I take a little peek and see my mum folding blankets and getting my uniform ready. Then I see something unusual I see this round looking thing it looks like a red donut holder inside it. “WAKE UP SIMEON!” shouted Mum.
“Ahhhhhh!”I Screamed.
“Mum why'd you do that I’m trying to sleep cause its the holidays,” I said.
“Holidays oh no you still think its the holidays hahaha,” Laughed Mum
“What's funny?”I said.
“Oh nothing except you forgot todays a school day!”
“What why didn't you tell me?”
“Well I was trying to but you kept trying to shut me up,” Said Mum.
“Well I’m sorry you could of told me before I went dozing off again,” I said.
“I did but you slammed the door on me!”
“Oh yea sorry,” I said
I rush as quickly as possible I put my uniform on and making sure to put my chromebook in my bag I check quickly if its dead or not but I remember that it did die and I left my charger in my dirty clothes oh no.
“Mum come back!” Shoot she can’t hear me she has her headphones on. I react quickly before she puts in the washing. I run as fast as I can before she gets to the washing.
“Mom wait!” I shouted.
“Huh what is it?
“My charger ahhh there you are.
After a while of rushing to get ready we finally get in the car to go to school.
Zzzz zzzz zzzz.
“Hahaha he went dozing off again,” Mum said
“Well this time we get to let him sleep for the whole day,” Said Dad.
THE END
Here is my writing about waking up on a Monday morning. It was inspired by video that my teacher Mr Crowe found online.
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