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Tuesday 9 December 2014

My End Of Year Reflection!


Here is my end of year reflection because it is near the end of 2014 now we
are heading into 2015! Hope you enjoy and have a great CHRISTMAS!

Wednesday 12 November 2014

Narrative Writing

Begin writing here:
I was meeting Garry under the bridge we we're going to have a fun time but then I did something wrong.
“Garry hurry up I'm already under the bridge and I'm freezing my fingers off!” Shouted Geoff.
“Stop being impatient just wait okay,” said Garry. Garry finally got here we we're getting the fireworks ready.
“Ready here it goes!” shouted Geoff. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! After I saw that fire work I just went crazy and couldn't control my shelf it was like I had boundless energy for fireworks.
“Fire works fire works oh I love fire works,” said Geoff.
“Geoff stop before you hurt someone!” Shouted Garry.
“Huh Garry watch out the bridge!” Shouted Geoff.
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Screamed Garry.
It was Sadistic moment for me to watch my brother get burned and squash by a bridge. Hes still alive but I don’t know how much longer he can survive.
“Doc, can I see him now?” said Geoff.
“Sure, but he won’t speak very long,” said the doctor.
“Hey man, how you doing?” said Geoff
“Well not very well,” said Garry.
“Listen I'm on my last dying breath I just want to say goodbye to you and the family and mum and dad you have a great life and never ever touch fireworks… Okay,” said Garry.
“Good bye and have a great life,” said Garry.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
“Good bye brother,” cried Geoff.
Cry cry cry cry.
Living with myself on the death of my brother was really sad and bad and I swear to never touch fireworks again.
THE END
This is my writing inspired by this prompt.
I hope you enjoy reading.

Geoff loves Guy Fawkes and looks
forward to it every year. But,
last night something went wrong.

Monday 27 October 2014


This it my presentation about Armageddon Its a fun event to go to there's gaming,
cosplay, anime, zombie events and all sorts of cool stuff.
I recommended you should go its a fun thing for the family.

Friday 24 October 2014

Writing The Ultimate Gaming battle of history.

Begging
Ding ding ding! Yah! “Glass dismiss have a great weekend not,” He said quietly. 
“Delirious!”
 “What!”
 “Want to meet up at my place!” 
“Sure what time!”
“Seven thirty!”
“Okay!”
“Can I bring Vanoss Nogla and Lui!”
“Sure!” 

Build up
Tump Tump Tump! “Hello Buac Lau you their!” 
“Oh hi guys come in so what do you guys want to do,” asked Buac Lau.
“Well I just came here to play video games,” said Vanoss.
“Well come on lets go,” kindly said Buac.
“ Sir I have located them,” said teleporting fat guy.
“You have thats great go and get them now teleporting fat guy,” Said Dragonborn.
“Yes Sir!”

Problem
“Guys watch out theres a guy on the left trying to flank us!” shouted Lui
“Don’t worry I got him hes down,” Said delirious.
Poof! “whoa what the game crashed,” said Buca Lau
“What!” shouted Nogla
“It didn't,” said teleporting fat guy.  
“you're all coming with me,” said teleporting fat guy.
“Wait no!” Shouted all of them
“ahhhhhhhhh!” they shouted in fear.
“Whoa we're are we?”
“I don’t know but at least we're in one peace,” said delirious said
“Never mind I said to early!”
“You're all coming with me!”

Problem pt 2
“Hello is anyone in here?”
“What who said that!”
“Me your brain” said brain.
“What my brain!” shouted Delirious.
“Yes am a really important piece you have to keep me safe,” said brain.
“Okay whatever you say just don’t hurt me,” said delirious. 
“Fus sha da!”
“My name is dragonborn and I have brought you here today to fight the side of good,” said dragonborn.
“So what do you say will you join us or the side of evil,” said dragonborn.
“Will join on one condition we can come back here when ever we want and we can have so much chocolate,” said delirious.
“Sure Ghost get that done,” said dragonborn.
“On it sir,”

Resolution 
“Everyone to your battle stations!”
“Ready steady attack!” 
As me and my friends run I feel the wind flowing through my hair I can smell the blood of my enemies disintegrating. But then I feel the thumping of big foots stomping. I see this big dog who has all the gaming powers you can imagine. I grab my sword and my gun and I can’t control my shelf I jump as high I can and I swing!
As the that devil dog disintegrates everybody is quiet for second then.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
“Delirious you beat him I can’t believe you beat dogzilla!”

Ending
“Congratulations delirious you defeated dogzilla and now we're free yaaaaa!”
“Teleporting fat guy take them home!”
“Yes sir!”
“Its been a pleasure to meet you goodbye also come back whenever you want,” kindly said dragonborn.
“Goodbye everyone,” 
The End.  
This is my writing it was inspired by a man being chase by a dog. It was a picture that my teacher found on the internet.



Saturday 18 October 2014

Narrative Writing Never Forget School

Never Forget School
Zzzz Zzzz Zzzz! “Simeon wake up!”
“What is it why did you wake me up from my slumber,” I said.
“Because,”bam!
“That's better I can crawl back into my little bed and have a little nap,” I said. here I go dozing off again.


10 Minutes later poof! “Huh!” I take a little peek and see my mum folding blankets and getting my uniform ready. Then I see something unusual I see this round looking thing it looks like a red donut holder inside it. “WAKE UP SIMEON!” shouted Mum.
“Ahhhhhh!”I Screamed.
“Mum why'd you do that I’m trying to sleep cause its the holidays,” I said.
“Holidays oh no you still think its the holidays hahaha,” Laughed Mum
“What's funny?”I said.

“Oh nothing except you forgot todays a school day!”
“What why didn't you tell me?”
“Well I was trying to but you kept trying to shut me up,” Said Mum.
“Well I’m sorry you could of told me before I went dozing off again,” I said.
“I did but you slammed the door on me!”
“Oh yea sorry,” I said

I rush as quickly as possible I put my uniform on and making sure to put my chromebook in my bag I check quickly if its dead or not but I remember that it did die and I left my charger in my dirty clothes oh no.  
“Mum come back!” Shoot she can’t hear me she has her headphones on. I react quickly before she puts in the washing. I run as fast as I can before she gets to the washing.
“Mom wait!” I shouted.
“Huh what is it?
“My charger ahhh there you are.

After a while of rushing to get ready we finally get in the car to go to school.
Zzzz zzzz zzzz.
“Hahaha he went dozing off again,” Mum said
“Well this time we get to let him sleep for the whole day,” Said Dad.

                                      THE END
Here is my writing about waking up on a Monday morning. It was inspired by video that my teacher Mr Crowe found online.

Friday 19 September 2014

Personification poem

Here is my poem about personification. Personification means describing a human thing to a noun human thing for example. The trees cry when they have been born.

The trees are big or small it is peaceful like the crying water and their destiny to be happy. They learn they eat they drink and it is their choice of how to live their life. Its their desire to live their life polite, wise or with fear. It is a small to think that their life is dying or lonely but they are thinking. They listen just like us they talk just like us they think like us. They are happy they mad they are whatever they want to be. They are not perfect they are not good but they are great and have enjoyable with smiles.

Friday 12 September 2014

Emotion Poetry

Here is my poem about anger. It is called a emotion poem. Emotion poems explain what emotion you want to talk about.        

The colours of anger are the colour of red and black, grey.
It tastes like a cold blooded cow going to freeze. Smells like red blood from the ceiling and looks like people abusing each other and the arguments of others. It feels like you're being punched by someone a million times. Anger hates me.   

Monday 8 September 2014

Poetry

Here is my poem about dogs it is called Diamante poem. Why is called diamante poem you say? It is because its shaped like a diamond.          


Dogs
Fluffy, cuddly,
Biting, barking, sniffing,
Bulldog, poodle, hot dog, rag dog
Chasing, trotting, eating,
Likeable, annoying,
Dogs.

Thursday 31 July 2014

Coral Reefs Map


Here is my map with a lot of Coral Reefs from around the world.

Friday 25 July 2014

My DLO


Here is my presentation about stolen food.

Thursday 24 July 2014

My Mihi

https://www.movenote.com/v/n8kpj8rouow6k
Here is my Movenote recording that I made with Miss Paton about my Mihi.

Friday 4 July 2014

My Thinglink about New Zealand coastlines


 Here is my Thinglink about New Zealand coastlines. If you want to check out the site click here. Here is my Thinglink about New Zealand coastlines. If you want to check out the site click here.

Thursday 3 July 2014

Thursday 26 June 2014

Word cloud Key competencies


Here is my word cloud about my Key competencies.

Nga Manawa Presentation

flox class have been working on a presentation about mangroves we had a special
vistor come and teach us about mangroves. Here is my presentation about mangroves. 

100 Word Challenge

Here is my 100 Word Challenge about these people going to the nether realm which is a place were it is really really hot and they had to go down there for samples. The prompt we were given is this but it was far too hot. If want to check out the 100 Word Challenge blog by clicking on it.

Tuesday 17 June 2014

100 Word Challenge


Here is my 100 Word Challege about the football world cup happening in South America. The prompt I was given is this. Also here is the site if you want to check it out. http://100wc.net

Thursday 12 June 2014

Wednesday 11 June 2014

The Secrets Used in Advertising.



Here is my popplet about the secrets of advertising on burgers. Here you will find how the burgers on TV look so mouthwatering.

Also please leave a comment below.

Thursday 5 June 2014

My Flipping eBook


Here is my flipping eBook that I made by using Flipsnak and its about my goal.

100 Word Challenge


Flint Lockwood The Amazing Inventor

Once upon a time there was a boy named Flint Lockwood he was always late to school because he always stays up late to invent machines so that he could show people at the end of the gateway. After school he would always stay at the gateway of school until six o'clock so he could show people his inventions but sometimes his mum works late so he has to run through the spooky pitch black night. And sometimes he always get scared running through the night. He would always get cold in the morning because he would always use his refreeze a ray to keep him cold for some reason. Flint Lockwood never had friends because everyone thought he was a nerd because they all thought he invented stupid machines. BANG! “Whoa what was that” “Flint Lockwood we are here to take you to a secret base” “what where” “in England” To be continued. 


The 100 word challenge is about making a short storys and trying making 100 words.The words we were given to put in our quick writes are Gateway, Cold, Running, Black, Friend.

Thursday 29 May 2014

Comment on Lyle's Blog

   Here is my screen shot of my comment to Lyle because he has earned a certificate in xtramath.

Learning map

Here is my learning map of the people that I can go to when I am stuck with my learning.

Friday 23 May 2014

Haypark school Sculpture trail brochure.

Mrs Archer and I and Sakina,Lorna jay have worked on this sculpture trail so we can show our family's what we have built out of recycled materials.
Here is the outside of the sculpture trail that we worked on.
This is the inside of the sculpture trail brochure.