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Wednesday 12 November 2014

Narrative Writing

Begin writing here:
I was meeting Garry under the bridge we we're going to have a fun time but then I did something wrong.
“Garry hurry up I'm already under the bridge and I'm freezing my fingers off!” Shouted Geoff.
“Stop being impatient just wait okay,” said Garry. Garry finally got here we we're getting the fireworks ready.
“Ready here it goes!” shouted Geoff. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! After I saw that fire work I just went crazy and couldn't control my shelf it was like I had boundless energy for fireworks.
“Fire works fire works oh I love fire works,” said Geoff.
“Geoff stop before you hurt someone!” Shouted Garry.
“Huh Garry watch out the bridge!” Shouted Geoff.
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Screamed Garry.
It was Sadistic moment for me to watch my brother get burned and squash by a bridge. Hes still alive but I don’t know how much longer he can survive.
“Doc, can I see him now?” said Geoff.
“Sure, but he won’t speak very long,” said the doctor.
“Hey man, how you doing?” said Geoff
“Well not very well,” said Garry.
“Listen I'm on my last dying breath I just want to say goodbye to you and the family and mum and dad you have a great life and never ever touch fireworks… Okay,” said Garry.
“Good bye and have a great life,” said Garry.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
“Good bye brother,” cried Geoff.
Cry cry cry cry.
Living with myself on the death of my brother was really sad and bad and I swear to never touch fireworks again.
THE END
This is my writing inspired by this prompt.
I hope you enjoy reading.

Geoff loves Guy Fawkes and looks
forward to it every year. But,
last night something went wrong.