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Showing posts with label Writing 2015 T3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2015 T3. Show all posts

Friday, 21 August 2015

The Viewer - Should Tristan


Here is a screenshot of padlet that our class participated in. Its about how if tristan should look through the machine again. Comment down if you think he should look through again or not.

The Viewer - The Mysterious Junkyard

Description
Here is me Rita and Damiens poem about the Junkyard. Here is were Tristan visited the Junkyard (The Viewer). Well he was here he found a mysterious machine (spoiler alert). If your wondering what is says here it is. I hope you enjoy and please comment below. Also tell me what you think about it.
The Mysterious Junkyard
A ISOLATED AND INFESTED LAND WITH
A RUINED ABANDONED DESTROYED
A ISOLATED 

A CORRUPTED CHILD
OF A FUTURISTIC AGE
DEAD LAND

Thursday, 20 August 2015

The Viewer - The Restless sleep

Description
This week we were talking and writing about the Viewer. Its a new topic in McCahon class. This is Me, Damien and Jasmines photo. I am modelling as Tristan from the book (The Viewer). So this part in the Viewer is where Tristan is so curious about a machine he found in the junkyard. He looked at few images and gasped because of the horrifying images he saw. So He went to sleep but he was so curious that he descended into a Restless Sleep! If you enjoyed please leave a comment below. Here is the link for the sound scape

Friday, 14 August 2015

Week 4 Term 3 Reflection

Week 4 Term 3 Reflection 2015

Backward-Looking:
What have been your learning highlights so far this term?
My highlights for this Term is having an AWESOME TIME AT CAMP! It was really cool doing camp there's lots of fun and great activities to do. My second highlight was going to the google educators student conference. It was really great because we learnt lots of new learning skills to share at home.



Inward-Looking:
What were your Learner Profile goals for Term 3? Have your goals changed? Are you on track to meet your goals?
To be a communicator and a contributor. My goals haven't really changed. I am actually on track to meet my goals. I am actually on track because starting to speak in public with other people. Also my goal to be a contributor is really begging. I participate in the ukulele group.



Outward-Looking:
If you were the teacher, what comments would you make about your learning so far this term?
I would say that I am showing really good leadership in camp. I also would say that I am really independent and very organized.



Forward-Looking:
As you look back at your learning so far, what's one thing that you would like to try to improve upon over the next few weeks?
My Maths

Description
This is my Week 4 Reflection. The 4 columns are Backwards Looking, Inward Looking, Outward Looking and Forward Looking. If you wonder what are the descriptions for all these columns there is sentences at the top of each column. Hope you enjoy and please say something in the comments if there's a mistake.

Thursday, 13 August 2015

Remember Poetry About Camp

That Was Camp.

Remember when I did Waka Ama and almost fell of the boat but then the paddle saved me?
Remember when I hit the blue bit of the board and got 20 points it felt amazing just to hit the board and get some awesome points?
That was Camp

Remember when my group had one of the tightest knots on a raft and it never fell apart.?
Remember how I was really terrified to climb down the giants ladder. But I manned up and went down anyways but I felt something cold go down my spine?
That was camp.

Remember how cool it was to catch a big wave with Dave and Harry while surf kayaking?
Do you remember how awesome it was to get the opportunity to go to camp?
That was Camp

This is my remember poem about camp. For this writing activity we were giving a template to write on. The first thing we had to do was brainstorm. I didn't brainstorm because I went to a student conference. Once we finished brainstorming we came up with a success criteria. After that we started to write our poem. Then we self and peer assessed. Then once we completed every single piece of our success criteria 
 we post on our blog. By the way here is a collage of camp photos that you can look at.