I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
This term we are going to be writing about all sorts of different texts. Here is my 4 sentence recount. Its about my boring holidays. I hope you enjoy my piece of writing.
Hey Simeon, I really liked how you got to ride a bike. I used to have a bike but not anymore. Its awesome that you learnt how to stand on the bike because I have been practicing when I had my bike. Its really hard. Amazing that Janine came back from Australia. Did you guys have cake when Janine came back? Did you learn any other tricks on your bike. From Sinead
Kia Ora Simeon WOW! that doesn't sound boring that is really cool having someone from Australia come to your house. But simeon that is really cool that you had a cool holiday Keep up the good work Simeon.
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ReplyDeleteHey Simeon,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you got to ride a bike.
I used to have a bike but not anymore.
Its awesome that you learnt how to stand on the bike because I have been practicing when I had my bike.
Its really hard.
Amazing that Janine came back from Australia.
Did you guys have cake when Janine came back?
Did you learn any other tricks on your bike.
From Sinead
Kia Ora Simeon
ReplyDeleteWOW! that doesn't sound boring that is really cool having someone from Australia come to your house. But simeon that is really cool that you had a cool holiday Keep up the good work Simeon.
from Hati
nice work you just spelled finished i remember the first time riding my bike and it didn't go well
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