Narrative Writing

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I was meeting Garry under the bridge we we're going to have a fun time but then I did something wrong.
“Garry hurry up I'm already under the bridge and I'm freezing my fingers off!” Shouted Geoff.
“Stop being impatient just wait okay,” said Garry. Garry finally got here we we're getting the fireworks ready.
“Ready here it goes!” shouted Geoff. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! After I saw that fire work I just went crazy and couldn't control my shelf it was like I had boundless energy for fireworks.
“Fire works fire works oh I love fire works,” said Geoff.
“Geoff stop before you hurt someone!” Shouted Garry.
“Huh Garry watch out the bridge!” Shouted Geoff.
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Screamed Garry.
It was Sadistic moment for me to watch my brother get burned and squash by a bridge. Hes still alive but I don’t know how much longer he can survive.
“Doc, can I see him now?” said Geoff.
“Sure, but he won’t speak very long,” said the doctor.
“Hey man, how you doing?” said Geoff
“Well not very well,” said Garry.
“Listen I'm on my last dying breath I just want to say goodbye to you and the family and mum and dad you have a great life and never ever touch fireworks… Okay,” said Garry.
“Good bye and have a great life,” said Garry.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
“Good bye brother,” cried Geoff.
Cry cry cry cry.
Living with myself on the death of my brother was really sad and bad and I swear to never touch fireworks again.
THE END
This is my writing inspired by this prompt.
I hope you enjoy reading.

Geoff loves Guy Fawkes and looks
forward to it every year. But,
last night something went wrong.

Personification poem

Here is my poem about personification. Personification means describing a human thing to a noun human thing for example. The trees cry when they have been born.

The trees are big or small it is peaceful like the crying water and their destiny to be happy. They learn they eat they drink and it is their choice of how to live their life. Its their desire to live their life polite, wise or with fear. It is a small to think that their life is dying or lonely but they are thinking. They listen just like us they talk just like us they think like us. They are happy they mad they are whatever they want to be. They are not perfect they are not good but they are great and have enjoyable with smiles.

Poetry

Here is my poem about dogs it is called Diamante poem. Why is called diamante poem you say? It is because its shaped like a diamond.          

Dogs

Fluffy, cuddly,

Biting, barking, sniffing,

Bulldog, poodle, hot dog, rag dog

Chasing, trotting, eating,

Likeable, annoying,

Dogs.

100 Word Challenge

Flint Lockwood The Amazing Inventor

Once upon a time there was a boy named Flint Lockwood he was always late to school because he always stays up late to invent machines so that he could show people at the end of the gateway. After school he would always stay at the gateway of school until six o'clock so he could show people his inventions but sometimes his mum works late so he has to run through the spooky pitch black night. And sometimes he always get scared running through the night. He would always get cold in the morning because he would always use his refreeze a ray to keep him cold for some reason. Flint Lockwood never had friends because everyone thought he was a nerd because they all thought he invented stupid machines. BANG! “Whoa what was that” “Flint Lockwood we are here to take you to a secret base” “what where” “in England” To be continued. 

The 100 word challenge is about making a short storys and trying making 100 words.The words we were given to put in our quick writes are Gateway, Cold, Running, Black, Friend.