The trees are big or small it is peaceful like the crying water and their destiny to be happy. They learn they eat they drink and it is their choice of how to live their life. Its their desire to live their life polite, wise or with fear. It is a small to think that their life is dying or lonely but they are thinking. They listen just like us they talk just like us they think like us. They are happy they mad they are whatever they want to be. They are not perfect they are not good but they are great and have enjoyable with smiles.
I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Friday, 19 September 2014
Personification poem
Here is my poem about personification. Personification means describing a human thing to a noun human thing for example. The trees cry when they have been born.
Friday, 12 September 2014
Emotion Poetry
Here is my poem about anger. It is called a emotion poem. Emotion poems explain what emotion you want to talk about.
The colours of anger are the colour of red and black, grey.
It tastes like a cold blooded cow going to freeze. Smells like red blood from the ceiling and looks like people abusing each other and the arguments of others. It feels like you're being punched by someone a million times. Anger hates me.
Monday, 8 September 2014
Poetry
Here is my poem about dogs it is called Diamante poem. Why is called diamante poem you say? It is because its shaped like a diamond.
Dogs
Fluffy, cuddly,
Biting, barking, sniffing,
Bulldog, poodle, hot dog, rag dog
Chasing, trotting, eating,
Likeable, annoying,
Dogs.
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